martes, 26 de febrero de 2008

Class English

Fusion Microsoft and Yahoo

I think that Microsoft have a problem with Free Software(Linux), this software has expansive because people prefer a free software that a software more expensive and privated. Software of Microsoft are privated because code of this program are not modificable.

Microsoft forward this problem think that buy Yahoo can have a posibility no disappear. Yahoo when they see this movement of Microsoft and their interest of buy Yahoo, they dont allow that Microsoft absorv their Company.

There are rumours that after the failure of buying that has Microsoft to Yahoo, Google tried to buy. I dont know with security this rumours that are running for Internet, but is secure that Google is imposible that to allow that Microsoft buy Google.

*DayanWitch*

2 comentarios:

xabieruk dijo...

Diana,
your current English teacher here.
content: 7
length: correct
grammar: 3

So, please check the many "you/your" that are wrong, check words like "privated", "posibility", "absorv", "they not permision", etc...

cheers!

DayanWitch dijo...

Thanks for your help and respond. I have updated the post and he changed the wording.

Greetings